Whats the point?
Just submit it as one whole thing; not seperate parts.
Each part is about 10 seconds long its pointless.
i liked the explosions, the chopper and the plane :)
too time consuming/hard on the early levels
make the paths wider + include moving obstacles
too easy to cheat
other than thta looks good
Too easy to cheat
Holding down left click you can just drag the cursor to the end.
You should also improve the graphics as they are not very detailed, the colour scheme does not work and it looks pretty ugly in general.
The whole mouse avioder thing has been done to death so maybe you should try and do something to make it more unique.
Heres what I think
Graphics: Great nothing wrong.
Style: Yeah but Its Just a demo.
Sound: Important changes needed. Bubuh, Bubuh over and over it grets annoying.
Violence: What No blood! sorry.
Interactivity: This is a big one. NOT ENOUGH control you need to be able to manouver Erk more around the screen.
Humour: You could add more of a storyline and include a strange twist.
The only fun thing was the boss which was too easy but I suppose he was the first one. Needs more guys to fight and better gameplay and control over Erk.
I hope this helps you when you come to make the real thing.
This is my only decent review in AGES so plz take it into account.
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